Post by chello on Jan 23, 2018 3:09:15 GMT
edit 1
down to earth
flitting around the edges
she is unclear/ where time ends
or begins or/ unwinds
to record itself
taking shallow breaths on the shore line
she rises water logged/ there's so much
she knows about drowning
without air/ each tiny alveoli
collapses inside her lungs/ scenting the air
around her mouth/ with wisteria
for a moment/ she catches a hint
of the lost child/ in a sliver/
an opening between/ spheres
in the flinch
of the wing/ of a bright yellow bird
flickering through her memory
down to earth she tumbles back
while above/ black legged kittiwakes fall
moving like angels/ making star shapes
and flowers/ in the atmosphere above her head
pulled from ocean cool breeze
spraying water as if she/ is the birth of venus
in her arms/ all her child’s waking moments
bright yellow bird in hand
singing/ heading skyward
swift departure/ floating home
edit 2
down to earth
flitting around the edges
blurring the line between
earth/ and sky
unclear/ where time ends
or begins or/ unwinds
to record itself
crisscrossing the thin vale
membrane of hope
taking small
shallow breaths on the shore line
wrenching moisture from lungs
spewing salty breath
water logged/ from the attempting
failing but still
there's so much
we know about drowning
without air/ each tiny alveoli
collapses/ scenting the air with wisteria
eyes still blurring from seawater
for a moment/ i thought i caught a hint
of you/ in a sliver/ opening between
spheres/ unable to distinguish
celestial being from sun
burning back the crusted film
that settled on my eyes when submerged
yet sure sign given/ in the flinch
of the wing/ of a bright yellow bird
flickering through my memory
down to earth you tumble
fast fleeting past me
a bright fascination/ subtle assurance
a mother’s damaged heart/ is not forgotten
while above/ black legged kittiwakes fall
moving like angels/ making star shapes
and flowers/ in the atmosphere above
cradled and reborn by waves
each grain of sand a hand/ i am
pulled from ocean cool breeze
spraying water
as if i/ am the vey birth of venus
dripping tiny shells
seaweed strung in hair
winged beings in attendance
in my arms all our waking moments
gathered from the ocean floor
bright yellow bird in hand
singing/ heading skyward
swift departure/ floating home
Edit 3
earthbound
flitting around edges
unclear/ where time ends
begins
shallow breaths on shore
drowning
without air/ each tiny alveoli
collapses/ wisteria scenting air
catching hint
of you/ in sliver opening between
spheres
bright yellow bird
flickering through memory
tumbling earthbound
kittiwakes fall
moving angels/ making shapes
in atmosphere
pulled from ocean breeze
emulating venus’ birth
arms filled with waking moments
bright yellow bird in hand
singing
edit 4 combined
down to earth
flitting around edges
blurring lines
earth/ sky
land/ sea
unclear/ where time ends
begins or/ unwinds
recording itself
she cross thin membrane
taking shallow breaths on shore
she rises water logged
wringing moisture
she knows about drowning
spewing salty breath
without air/ each tiny alveoli
collapsing her lungs/
wisteria scenting air
around her mouth
open/ rasping
seawater stinging eyes
momentarily/ catching hint
lost child/ in a sliver
opening between/ spheres
sun blurring
burning back film
merging celestial beings
wing flinch
of bright yellow bird
flickering through her memory
tumbling earthwards
fleeting past her
bright assurance
her heart to heal
above/ kittiwakes falling
moving angels shapes
in the atmosphere
wave cradled reborn
sand grains sifting
pulled from ocean breeze
spraying water
she is birth of venus
dripping shells
seaweed in hair
her arms sheltering/ child’s waking moments
gathered from ocean floor
bright yellow bird in hand
singing/ heading skyward
swift departure
floating home